change nect to: neck
change dimished to: diminished
Photon-generating should be: Proton-generating

change Fat Boy to: Fat Man
change Fat Boy’s to: Fat Man’s

change Canon-fired to: Cannon-fired

change hardened steel protection…to: depleted uranium shielding

insert a period after electrons

largest possible threat should read: “largest reasonable threat”

change for use in pipes to: to make pipes for solar arrays

change lower extremities to: lower abdomen
one kilowatt should read: one kilowatt hour

change BCRA to: BRCA

delete: Howard W. Dickson, CHP, President, Dickson Consulting, LLC